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布朗大学 · K同学:从国际学校到英美两国的世界名校青睐:看学美如何助力文科女孩获录布朗大学Offer
2021-04-25 发表
来源:学美
2020年的申请季已经落下了帷幕。这个申请季,学美再次成为offer收割机:截止4月17日,学美学员已陆续收获美国常春藤名校:耶鲁大学,哥伦比亚大学,宾夕法尼亚大学,康奈尔大学,布朗大学,以及英国牛津大学等本科offer。
 
同时,随着学美影响力的不断提升,生源的不断扩大,学美的学生也越来越呈现出了多样化。今天我们就跟随这位成绩优异的女孩,看看她是如何获得美国常青藤名校布朗大学以及英国剑桥大学等名校offer。
 
K同学小档案
TOEFL:115
SAT:1460
高中学校:上海惠灵顿国际学校
美国本科录取院校:
Brown University 布朗大学
University of California-Los Angeles
加州大学洛杉矶分校
University of Southern California
南加利福尼亚大学
Claremont McKenna College
克莱蒙特·麦肯纳学院
Middlebury College 明德学院
Wesleyan University 卫斯理大学
英国本科录取院校:
University of Cambridge 剑桥大学
The London School of Economics and Political Science 伦敦政治经济学院
 
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关于结缘学美
学美是可以信任和托付的机构,帮助我收获英美多所名校Offer
 
Hi, my name is K. I go to Wellington College International Shanghai, studying for the IB diploma. I consider myself a humanities student, which is why I applied for History or Business major for my universities, including Brown, UCLA, USC Marshall, Cambridge, and LSE, from which I received offers.
 
I discovered CEDCA through a friend, and after meeting with several agencies, my mom and I agreed that CEDCA was the one we could trust with this important journey.
 
大家好,我是学生K。我就读于上海惠灵顿国际学校,学习的是IB课程。我觉得自己是一个偏向人文学科的学生,所以我选择了历史和商科作为我申请的专业,申请院校包括布朗大学,加州大学洛杉矶分校,南加州大学马歇尔商学院,剑桥大学,和伦敦政治经济学院等,从这些学校我都收到了录取通知书。
 
我当时是通过一个朋友认识了学美,在接触过几家留学机构以后,我和我母亲都认为学美就是那个在这段重要旅程中我们可以信任和托付的机构。
 
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关于选校、文书和面试辅导
学美给予我最专业的指导
 
For me, the areas in which CEDCA was most helpful were college selection, essays, and interview preparation. 
 
Being very busy with IB work and SAT prep, I had very little time to sift through rankings in search of colleges that fit me. After informing CEDCA of the characteristics I wanted in universities, I received a filtered list of potential colleges, which I could then research in-depth on my own.
 
As for all the essays involved in the application process, I had no idea how to structure them or what best to include. It was very helpful, therefore, to have several editors commenting on them and giving advice.
 
As for interviews, I had enough practice with the help of CEDCA that I felt I understood what to expect when going into an Ivy league interview, and had prepared responses beforehand.
 
对于我来说,学美对我帮助最大的方面是院校选择,文书写作和面试辅导。
由于忙于准备IB课程和SAT考试,因此我几乎没有时间筛选排名去寻找合适自己的院校。在告诉学美顾问我对院校的要求后,我收到了一份经过筛选的潜在选校名单,借此我可以自己进行更加深入的院校研究和选择。
 
对于申请过程中涉及的所有文书题目,我不知道该如何组织它们或者最好包括什么。因此,拥有几位文书老师对这些文书题目发表见解并提出建议是非常有帮助的。
对于面试,我在学美的帮助下进行了足够的练习,因此已经了解了进入常春藤联盟面试该有的期待,并且提前准备了应对回答。

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关于进步和成长
坦率沟通是最有效的沟通方式
 
Funnily enough, I think my ability to withstand honest criticism of my work improved. The teachers editing my application essays were very frank in their praise or critique, which was the most efficient way to go about the process, and which made me realize that I shouldn’t feel disheartened by it.
 
有趣的是,我觉得自己承受真诚批评的能力提高了。修改我申请文书的老师们对我的赞扬和批评都非常坦率,这是这个过程中最有效的方式,并且这让我意识到我不该为这些感到沮丧。
 
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回顾与学美的合作
学美给我的最深刻的印象和最有价值的支持
 
I think one of the most potent memories I have of my cooperation with CEDCA was the hope I felt after one meeting. I had been very worried about my scores and extracurricular, but we had worked out a plan and suddenly I felt that everything was possible. 
 
I think the most valuable support I received was in the sphere of essays. I applied for 22 US universities, and that required large volumes of written work, which I don’t believe I would have had the ability or motivation to edit all on my own. 
 
我对我们合作最深刻的记忆之一是在一次辅导后感受到的希望。我当时很担心我的硬性指标和课外活动,但是在我们制定出了一份计划以后,它让我突然觉得一切都是有可能的。
我认为我得到的最有价值的支持是在文书写作方面。我申请了22所美国大学,而这需要大量的文书写作工作,我不相信自己当时会有能力或动力,来独自写作和编辑所有文书内容。
 
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关于经验分享
英美双申需要特别注意:提前制定时间表
 
To the students applying next year, I just want to say: believe in yourself, don’t be afraid to try even when the percentages are daunting. If you are applying for the US, start planning early, and remember that SATs and other scores are never deal-breakers. I had an SAT score of 1460, despite retaking it four times, but everything worked out fine in the end. Also, if you are considering applying both UK and US, it is important to work out the timelines beforehand; you don’t want to have your Oxbridge interview or exam to clash with important days for your US application. Good luck!
 
对于明年申请的学生,我只想说:相信自己,即使录取率低得令人畏惧,也不要害怕尝试。如果你申请的是美本,那么就要尽早开始计划,并且要记住SAT和其他硬性指标并不是阻挡你的因素。我的SAT成绩是1460分,尽管重考了四次,但最后一切得到了不错的结果。此外,如果你考虑同时申请英国和美国的学校,那么提前制定出时间表是很重要的;你肯定不希望你的牛剑面试或考试与你美本申请的重要日期发生冲突。祝你们好运!